Access Keys:

 
 
Camphill Primary School, Ballymena
Have a look inside our school building by viewing our new 3D TOUR on the HOME page of our website..... go on a tour by clicking and following the little person icon... | On Wednesday all parents will receive a link to complete a Safer Schools NI 'Digital Proficiency course' - we would strongly encourage as many parents as possible to complete this, as it represents the final step in achieving our status as a Certified Safer Schools NI Digital School. All details will be sent via Parentmail.  | P1/P2 parents - please see Sustrans 'Ditch the stabilisers' confirmation of workshop times out via Parentmail on Friday 12th June. ..... | P6 parents - please see information coming out this week regarding the P7 Residential Trip in June 2027.  | P7 parents - Canteen Celebration Lunch details - see Parentmail on Monday 8th.  | We are delighted to have our P1/2 and P3/4 Sports Day completed (mostly in the sun) on Monday 8th - see photos in NEWS below..... KS2 Sports Day is now re-scheduled for Monday 15th June at 10am. (Please note this is the first available date that we have all P5/6/7 pupils available together). All KS2 pupils to come to school on Monday 15th June in school PE Kit. | School Uniform - online shop (under PARENTS area) now open for orders up until Friday 24th July.
open new window
pause
play

P5JS Instructional Writing ✍️

25th Nov 2025

During this term, our writing genre has been instructional writing. We have explored the different features over a number of weeks to lead us to our final pieces of writing.

Our writing process looked a little like this…

1. Familiarisation- We explored a range of ‘real-life’ examples of instructions. Throughout this, we took the time to notice the difference between sets of instructions. We even went on an ‘instructions walk’ throughout the school to spot instructions we come across every day. This helped us to notice the common features of instructional writing. 

2. Analysing features- We looked for the different features in examples of instructional writing. We also considered a world without instructions… our conclusion was ‘hectic’! 

3. Modelled writing- Once we were familiar with all the desired features, Miss Simpson modelled how to write an effective set of instructions. We then cut and stick the instructions into the correct order. Our key lesson from this was: read over our work and it is ok to make mistakes (even teachers make mistakes)! 

4. Shared writing- We created a set of shared instructions, ‘How to Make an Ice-cream Sundae’. Everyone had an input as to what should come next and checked all of the desired features were present. This step helped us to put our knowledge into practice, as well as making us hungry! 

5. Guided writing- Throughout this stage, we wrote a set of instructions on ‘How to Mummify an Apple’. We also re-arranged a set of instructions which detailed, ‘How to Build a Table’. Miss Simpson gave us a little guidance but we were very confident in our knowledge of instructional writing. 

6. Independent writing- The final outcome! We were all able to independently write a set of effective instructions on ‘How to Make a Clay Cartouche’. 

Have a look at some of our fantastic work!